Growth Poem by Asha Hassan

Growth

Rating: 5.0


As reward for my patient years
Of sorrow, laughter, joy and tears
Life's handed me (to my surprise)
A "me" I cannot recognise

Her hands are bigger to catch pain
That weighs her down like heavy rain
Her eyes brighter, so she can see
The world I found a mystery

Her heart's tougher, than ever mine
So she will handle life just fine
But there's so much she doesn't know
And so much more she needs to grow

So when I think of years of yet
I remind her to not forget
That though she stands a better chance
One day she'll need a stronger stance

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: change,growing up,growth,learning,lessons of life,personality,strength,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written when I was 16 because I always felt like I had a lot to learn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

Welcome to Poem Hunter! A beautiful poem! I quote, “Her hands are bigger to catch pain That weighs her down like heavy rain” Enjoyed the poetic expression….10.

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George Krokos 28 November 2017

Very nicely written. Welcome to Poem Hunter Asha.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2017

Such a fine poem, Asha....a perfect 10++++*

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