Continue Struggle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Continue Struggle



Think not about failure
And make sure
It may not happen again
It shall bring gain

Feel sad when moments compel
But try to feel good at will
It is ultimate goal
To make it as good call

We are not here to suffer
But offer
Best as much as we can
As life makes us to run

We may lose parent
And repent
If not served them well
Just keep courage then to tell

Life makes us to learn
And later on earn
Good name for good work
Let it not be adored with only words

Truth shall remain as truth
It may need no proof
As day is witness of sun
Night represents beauty of moon

Wednesday, November 5, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Widespread corruption and the use of black money Faraz Zafar2 hours ago Not bad actually, it sure does convey the message but, it lacks a rhyme scheme. And you know what a rhyme scheme often does make all the difference. Keep trying and have a nice day :) 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

amazing Anoeska Verdick2 hours ago straight to the point. I like it Comment +1 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Amazing Dushyant Bhola1 hour ago A poem of national interest for every country. Very beautiful theme nicely penned. Comment +1 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Inner struggle Larry W. Morgan2 hours ago The struggle is in the heart of man, Battling free spirit, or the loss there of. The spirit is there for God, there should be no battle. Good Write, it has a spark of eye openers, thanks for sharing. 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Think not about failure And make sure

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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