Continue To Fight Poem by Lin Whisperwind

Continue To Fight

Rating: 4.8


Many things she wants to do
but little time she has
all the world she wants to rule
but feels so powerless
even her body 's out of control
How to continue to fight?
but still there's fire deep in her soul
hoping to see some light

Tuesday, November 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fighting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Yes.. it is about me^^ Just some thoughts..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 December 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Lin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Susan Williams 28 November 2018

Love your nom de plume! It is hard to post a comment on a poem when the site jumps every few seconds so I am pasting and copying everything I can. You have set up an interesting scene here. thank you for sharing your insightful poem.

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2018

Well thought-out and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Lin.

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