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He makes a request but there is no reaction
He requests it again, now with more energy
No reaction
Stands up and screams
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Wow! An intense poem with a surprise ending! Welcome to Poem Hunter! You have a good start with your first poem here. Keep it up!
Loved reading the poem gripped by the horror and suspense as if watching a horror movie or reading a detective novel. You have won over with your very first poem on PH. Thanks. Slides in two double A's Puts on the back
It’s sad to say that’s what some women are going through; domestic violence (even now as I write these words) and there is no reaction because the first hit has caused the last breath. Good, you were talking about the TV remote.
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12/19/2025 1:22:41 PM # 1.0.0
An insight depiction of sheer madness occasioned by utter frustration, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Guy.