Cool Duskiness Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Cool Duskiness

Rating: 5.0

Intense thirst in the sweltering desert,
yet, the emerald succulents still thrive;
for surviving, often takes extra effort.
Intense thirst in the sweltering desert,
Then cool moon arrives, as if pressured.
A beautiful, flowering cacti night, alive!
Intense thirst in the sweltering desert,
yet, the emerald succulents still thrive.

Cool Duskiness
Wednesday, January 15, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written in the triolet form. Photo by Ri Butov at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful. Finding ‘cool moon', ‘flowering cacti night' and ‘emerald succulents' in ‘ Intense thirst in the sweltering desert' comes naturally to Evelyn whose inner positive energy thrills the reader. Thank you, Evelyn. Top score

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 January 2025

It's so nice to feel appreciated. Thank you very much for your joy inducing remarks. I'm thrilled.

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