Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Countless Deaths - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Free to feel and easy to live
O, god in your land and believe
That you are only one and alone
Let our mistakes and past be bye gone

We would love to suffer
Prayers and peace may always offer
Take us to safety and grant peace
Small land if you can give us please

It was with us and belonged
Our forefathers struggled and longed
Some documents faked and forged
We are driven away and refused

Can it be not the same again?
At what cost may be the gain?
Our children bath with blood
Shortage of everything even with food

We ask only freedom
That has been denied seldom
What can be way out with wisdom?
How many more graveyards may come up as doms?

"Here lay our future generation"
They never knew what can be sacred relationship
They suffered onslaught and lay dead
We may look at them and read

Holy wars are fought on countless deaths
There may be left no space for laying wreath
Yet that has to be attained with supreme sacrifice
Land may ask fulfillment of promise

Grant us O. lord your blessings and mercy
We can only pray you almighty
You are sole observer of the play
Show us the reasonable and honorable way

We may owe and remain indebted
Even though our course now is ill fated
Our sacrifice can't be equated
As it is blood soaked and down rated


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2012 4:07:00 AM)


    Kamalesh Ravishankar Raval oh lord....where u r....we human living in close jar.....let me ctry to reach u.....even u may millions mile so far.....love n bless for sharing....aameen
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2012 10:36:00 AM)


    Posted By: Billyrob - on May 23,2012
    Grant us O. lord your blessings and mercy We can only pray you almighty You are sole observer of the play Show us the reasonable and honorable way What a well written piece you've penned here. Maybe if we can all stop listening to our false prophets, the priests, pastors, rabbis, imams, and all the rest that preach only one path to God, we will realize we all worship the God of Abraham and are, therefore, brothers and sisters. Yet, humans refuse simple answers and their memories are tuned to past atrocities. A very well done from me. Billyrob
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 8:33:00 AM)


    Jyotiprakash Shukla beautifull 6 minutes ago · Like (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 8:32:00 AM)


    ANALIA FREE P.. private message Oh friend, ooooh. How can you do it. You have talent and a great heart. Thanks for ever. Please give it a (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 8:32:00 AM)


    Frederick VirtualMemento Odutola Do you write all these poems sir?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/21/2012)


    Free to feel and easy to live
    O, god in your land and believe
    That you are only one and alone
    Let our mistakes and past be bye gone
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 20, 2012



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