Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Crash And Burn Comments

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it eats my insides, especially my heart
for i have no need for it when there is no one apart of me
destroy my lungs for i have no need for air
for im tired of living in my life of despair
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Andrew Olson
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aww... man life is too short to dwell on things you regret. Cheer up, your awsomly sad poem is making me a little blue I must confess. Still it's nonetheless awsome!

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Sage of Time 04 September 2008

i love it! ! ! its so sad thats one of the only things i feel to very awesome poem

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Tanya Stanford 02 September 2008

Very dramatic and sad. Really well written. Emotions expressed clearly

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