Crawl Poem by Joey Gavin

Crawl



When your feet crawl up the wall
you feel your falling off the road
and your mind is set on fire
your eyes water from desire
as they try to spot a glimpse
and your diplomats conspire
as they dropp thier subtle hints

When your hair is to attention
but your shoes have gone astray
and your looking to prevent
on every count of every day
and the thunder goes a running
theres a thump and little pout
so what little time is left
and what is frail and what is doubt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 18 April 2009

This is an amazing piece Joey...the imagery you have used is perfect....10+++

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