Craze For Friendship Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Craze For Friendship

Rating: 4.9


I had craze for friendship
Not so serious about companionship
Longed for quick and easy union
May be some friendly relation or reunion

I could not find eyes so bright
Not sparkling such as light
don’t know whether I was wrong or right
Considered it always as male’s might

Though I could subdue the woman
Could convince only one as her man
Never realized that it is not the game
ventured for it as pride and fame

I must be spared as simple fool
Did not think yet high with mind cool
Are we animals who can fall prey?
On grazing ground with pastures grey

Anybody may be proved wrong
Hunt may not go indefinitely and for long
You may be able to lure but not succeed
Evil design may fail before you proceed

May be lust and sex have their own priority?
Can’t be weighted with logic and parity
Interest may match but won’t go further
Strom may come but soon stand to wither

Look and see it happens with sincere desire
We should acclaim and openly admire
Friendship is not the commodity to exchange
Long spell to remain with if we manage

I may not succeed to dwell at length
Right feelings have desire and strength
Nothing to worry if rightly moved
Give full honour to the love to be loved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nagesh Ratnavelu 28 August 2009

Thought I could subdue the woman Could be only one as her man..............10

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K.v. Subbarao 27 August 2009

I may not succeed to dwell at length Right feelings have desire and strength.......10

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Indani Narayan 26 August 2009

must be spared as simple fool Did not think high with mind cool....10

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Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

Longed for quick and easy union May be some friendly relation for reunion.....10

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Suwarna Patil 25 August 2009

I had craze for friendship But not so serious about companionship.....10

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Sachin Goswami 17 September 2009

had craze for friendship But not so serious about companionship

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Twinkle Vohra 14 September 2009

Longed for quick and easy union May be some friendly relation for reunion

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Sagarika Shah 14 September 2009

I had craze for friendship But not so serious about companionship Longed for quick and easy union May be some friendly relation for reunion

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Venkat Ramanna 04 September 2009

Thought I could subdue the woman Could be only one as her man Never realized it is not the game....10

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Ramdulari Sinha 28 August 2009

must be spared as simple fool Did not think high with mind cool Are we animal who can fall prey? .......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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