Craziness Poem by nader baheri

Craziness

Rating: 5.0


Craziness
Inside me
Emptiness
I can see

Happiness
Far thing to get
Sorriness
Only thing to remain

Craziness
I have tried rational mind
Nothingness
I have only found

Feelingless
Going on and on
Hopeless
Pursuing the fun

Loneliness
Walking on and on and on
Useless
Hanging on the telephone

Bottomless
The life without end
Craziness
Inside me
To be kept
Never end, never be free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Dark Lifetime . 01 January 2014

I love how the feeling you get when you read is how calm the mind is even if its craziness you read about. I feels like real craziness is not screams its calm an smart. Very good poem my friend!

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Mohsen Fard 09 November 2013

Great ideas in concise and compact lines.

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2013

Well done on rhyming, and craziness follow...._Soul

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