Rik Bertrand

Rookie - 0 Points (18 April 1959 / Portland, Oregon)

Create My World - Poem by Rik Bertrand


Create a world of your own desires,
where all the heroes are all the liars.
Feel it full of empty visions,
idle love and indecisions.

Create a time where there’s no hope,
where life hangs by a rope.
Feel it full of empty dreams,
Where nothing is what it seems.

Create a space where you can run,
where sadness lingers in the sun.
Where hope has vanished needlessly,
where feeling love can never be.

Create a life with emotions lost,
where with every decision you pay a cost.
Where crying is the better way,
and the blues is with you everyday.

Create this world and you will see,
Through the eyes of lonely me.


Comments about Create My World by Rik Bertrand

  • (2/22/2011 1:45:00 PM)

    This is very sad! Sometimes everyone feels this way one time of their life. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/8/2008 8:14:00 AM)

    i liked the way you created the picture of the world of your imagination
    and at the same you also give a valubale message to the reader that we need to change it
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  • (9/7/2008 10:49:00 AM)

    This poem is great, I love how you make people see how you se the world.Its deffinetly a well writen poem that displays great emotion. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 7, 2008

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