CREATE MY WORLD
Create a world of your own desires,
where all the heroes are all the liars.
Feel it full of empty visions,
idle love and indecisions.
Create a time where there’s no hope,
where life hangs by a rope.
Feel it full of empty dreams,
Where nothing is what it seems.
Create a space where you can run,
where sadness lingers in the sun.
Where hope has vanished needlessly,
where feeling love can never be.
Create a life with emotions lost,
where with every decision you pay a cost.
Where crying is the better way,
and the blues is with you everyday.
Create this world and you will see,
Through the eyes of lonely me.
REB
i liked the way you created the picture of the world of your imagination and at the same you also give a valubale message to the reader that we need to change it
This poem is great, I love how you make people see how you se the world.Its deffinetly a well writen poem that displays great emotion.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is very sad! Sometimes everyone feels this way one time of their life.