What Are You Thinking What Do You See Poem by Rik Bertrand

What Are You Thinking What Do You See

Rating: 4.9


What is it that amazes you?
Is it the magic that is in the air?
Who is it that you're thinking of?
Is it the one for who you care?

I create my own views of life,
Mystical and full of love.
I imagine what I want to see,
And it all appears from above.

But tell me what are you thinking of,
Do you see your true desires?
Do they appear as do mine?
Dancing on the evening fires.

I wonder as I look at you
Do you see what I do see?
Are you dancing with me tonight?
Feeling love and feeling free.

REB (MAY 2012) I was just thinking, that's ok isn't it?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 15 May 2012

Yes, that was a beautiful thought in that poem, and a pleasure to read.

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Savita Tyagi 27 May 2014

Lovely poem. Feel free and feel happy.

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Jayne Davies 27 May 2013

Lovely poem! Well done x

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..... W@king Up..... 27 May 2013

Of course thinking is okay :) because it allowed you to compose this wonderful poem! Great work :) -W

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 May 2012

Helpless loneliness is so loud. Nice write.

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Kasia Fedyk 27 May 2012

Yes, mystical and full of love, I do the same, Thank you for such a beautiful poem, a song to every heart.

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Rik Bertrand

Rik Bertrand

Portland, Oregon
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