Tuesday, October 13, 2020

Creatures Of Unrest Comments

Rating: 5.0

We do not know how to rest
When we should be content
Blessed with so much
We find ourselves hungering for something else
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Shalom Freedman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2020

We are blessed by God so much. We feel his mercy and beautify life with greater responsibility. It is true that we cannot control and understand unrest creatures. But we have to motivate life with greater responsibility. We perceive many things but we know not the meaning of each perception. This poem is excellently penned..5 stars.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 October 2020

We would be dead alive if we did not seek new stuff till death do us part. Some i hear even after death they seek to come haunt us. As poets we seek " New Poetry" .

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