Critical Remark Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Critical Remark



I look at my progress card
It shows promising start
The readers swell at site
It is enough for me to delight

Never in progress report
So many thousands made call at port
More than ten thousands read poems or ticked
I was amused and surely liked

Readers have started liking
I go on regularly writing
I love reading theirs and comment
But I rarely make gesture for their views to present

I am of firm view
With concept new
Readers like no reminders
They surely read and offer

What should I offer with thanks?
They are quite frank
I do not offend anyone for critical remark
I check it once and make fresh start

Tuesday, December 30, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2014

Ishan Gandhi shared a link. 1 min · Critical remark I look at my progress card It shows promising start The readers swell at site POEMHUNTER.COM Like · · Share Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2014

I look at my progress card It shows promising start

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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