Saturday, February 11, 2006

Criticism Comments

Rating: 5.0

What are they laughing about,
Laughing and joking and starting to shout?
A little girl is in the corner with her head down.
She feels like the guiltiest person in town.
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Crystal Dawn
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***** ********* 11 February 2006

I agree Crystal, even apparent light hearted crit can be the death noll to a young sensitive soul, well not quite final, but it chips away. People should think before they judge others. I liked your poems ability to get under the skin. Well done. 10 from expert skin diver! Tai

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Portsmouth, Virginia
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