Crystal Dawn

Rookie (May 17,1974 / Portsmouth, Virginia)

Crystal Dawn Poems

1. Life 2/11/2006
2. Criticism 2/11/2006
3. Daddy, Please Don’t Lie 2/11/2006
4. Ode To Mary 2/11/2006
5. Knocking At The Door 2/11/2006

Comments about Crystal Dawn

  • Sofia P (5/18/2004 7:06:00 PM)

    Reading the Fetus I am questioning the grounds of poetry... Though I believe most your poems are very mature, I think for that specific one you still haven't decided if you want people to read it or feel it as you felt it when you wrote. The latter happened to me, and therefore my objection. I would have liked to be warned, and so far I believe poems warn you somehow by possessing that very character of 'a poem'... But then again, art doesn't have to be admired, not even accepted, to be good.

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Criticism

What are they laughing about,
Laughing and joking and starting to shout?
A little girl is in the corner with her head down.
She feels like the guiltiest person in town.
She wears all the styles, but they don’t care.
She tells herself it just isn’t fair.
She starts to hate herself
And takes the pills off the shelf.
The little girl’s heart has now died.
As I ask you, “Are you satisfied? ”

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