Monday, November 17, 2008

Crossing Over Comments

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Leaves whisper sound of our past,
Echoes of loss and grief,
Our song is sung by the wind.
Shimmering light flickers,
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Jess Sinnamon
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Michael Walker 07 October 2019

I like 'Walking through the gates of heaven'. Also the sound of leaves whispering, reminding us of the past. Very compact poem.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 November 2008

The good and the bad crossing over, leaving mankind in mayhem.........and chaos.Nice piece Jess.

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I like the title of your write - sounds a bit biological :) very original idea lol

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Jess Sinnamon

Jess Sinnamon

Taupo//King Country// NZ
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