Sunday, September 7, 2008

Crunchy Leaves Beneath My Feet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crunchy leaves beneath my feet
Tumbling to the path
Storms blow through as autumn comes
A taste of nature's wrath
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I just love the perfect rhyme and rhythm and the poem captures the changing of the seasons. The title drew me to this poem and the word 'crunchy' goes so well with leaves. Beautiful work. 10 Karin Anderson

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Thad Wilk 07 September 2008

A wonderful and descriptive write, these Autumn days bring much delight! Best wishes Marilyn! *10* Friend Thad

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Mamta Agarwal 07 September 2008

lovely poem about Autmn a chill in the night time hours but the colors are so exquisite. thanks10

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Marilyn Lott

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