Cry Poem by Cate Jade

Cry

Rating: 3.5


The sad feelings growing on me
Filling me with nothing but pain
my heart i never ending flame tree
endless no hope to gain

I want help but i feel nothing
just myself to hold me up
but the sadness keeps gushing
till I'm left nothing but an empty cup

Take me with you
to the world different from the reality
maybe i can be like you
and learn whats its like to be a better me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feeling weak inside only tears i cry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 08 March 2013

I can be like you. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Hamzeh Al-saieedy 08 March 2013

great poem! three stanzas, free meters, simple language, nice flowing.. touching words please feel free to check out my poems!

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