Joseph J. Hernandez

Rookie (March 30,1992 / Los Angeles)

Cupid's Ache - Poem by Joseph J. Hernandez

You have Cupid in agonizing melancholy
He almost die of shock
Forcefully ripped out his arrow
Now his ideas you mock
Careless of this constant sorrow
In a rage he breaks his bow in two
Just to show, anger as his continues tears flow

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  • Robin Bennett (8/22/2012 1:26:00 PM)

    This is a good write, but like me you have a couple of typo's. Trust me I am the queen in that department. So I try and proof each piece twice before I submit it. You have a unique take on a subject that is written about so often, so that's really refreshing to see. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 6, 2013

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