Joseph J. Hernandez

Rookie (March 30,1992 / Los Angeles)

Writing - Poem by Joseph J. Hernandez

I write, but it will never be
As beautiful as a pond, cloud, or tree
Men can make wine with the aid of a grape
Honey is produced by a bee
Mother nature molds the elegance of flower
Poems are made by fools like you and me


Comments about Writing by Joseph J. Hernandez

  • (8/23/2012 8:51:00 AM)


    An interesting little poem. I find it very true. (Report) Reply

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  • Robin Bennett (8/22/2012 1:22:00 PM)


    great piece. I like the message in this, even though it is short it says a whole lot. Anyway, poems about clouds...
    boring.... I would much rather read this. Great job!
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  • (8/22/2012 1:20:00 PM)


    Well, you have made a good start, stay with it..Like your rhyme pattern and enjoyed this one.
    Also liked the brevity. Will review more later
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012



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