Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Cycle (Estrangement) Comments

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It's called a whimper-
that dryness lining the concerted
folds of your smile
almost like a disruption
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Cheryl Renaud
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Joseph Daly 12 July 2006

A lovely imagery going on here Cheryl. I like the flow of the piece and the pause for a second stanza. It works well.

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