Kayla Corinne Beneteau

Rookie (Febuary/27/1993 / A'burg)

Daddy's Little Defect - Poem by Kayla Corinne Beneteau

Daddy's little girl,
so innocent and profound,
so sweet as sugar,
but behind the mask is where the enemy lays,
deep deep down she wants to cry,
her drug addiction out of control,
her arms hidden,
her life has taken its toll,
as she lays her head to sleep,
through the closet door her demons will creep,
she closes her eyes tightly,
and gasps for air,
she cannot breath,
with her last breath she wishes on the brightest star,
'help me please'
she lives no more

Comments about Daddy's Little Defect by Kayla Corinne Beneteau

  • Rajinder Singh (2/1/2010 10:28:00 AM)

    you have to fight your own battles others can only support you.Be strong (Report)Reply

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  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (12/2/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    Wow, that's really deep stuff. I can tell you reached deep within yourself to write that. And I know it's not easy to admit things like that. Great poem though, it flows really well. (Report)Reply

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (9/2/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    very touching! keep writing! I like the words, 'help me please', she lives no more. could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones? (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 12, 2009

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