Guarded Heart

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Damning Her Part3 - Poem by Guarded Heart

she starts out towards home
unsuspecting innocent that she is
you lurk in the shadows
hunting her, preying on her

she hears something in the alley
she's relieved it's just you
she throws her arms around your neck
she has no idea what you plan to do

her sensual perfume entoxicates you
you can't think as your fangs sink
into the soft flesh
encasing her neck
she cries out in pain not pleasure
as she realizes what you've done to her

you've damned her it's true
you've made her one of you
inconsiderate for not asking if you could do this
but you've given her the gift of immortal bliss

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  • (12/18/2005 6:05:00 PM)


    ooooooooo a nice twist to this story. nice.
    Lylyanna
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 15, 2005


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