Dark And Swirling Poem by Cody Moore

Dark And Swirling

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My hair floats by my face
It moves like smoke from a cigarette
Warmth engulfs my body, fluid
Calm and peaceful in the dark
Enjoying the swirling current around me

Air! Where is the air
Panic fright flailing gasping
Hair moves like snakes to choke me
Disorienting dark fear
Calm and peaceful in the dark
Enjoying the swirling current around me

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Alex Rios 18 July 2009

That's a great poem! Is your hair curly?

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