Dark Hole Poem by Afsoon afsoon

Dark Hole



I have fallen, i am weak.
Fallen in a deep dark hole
Filled with emotions and emptiness.
The Heart's passions have taken over.

The day i met you and fell for you,
My entity changed
I live only by knowing you're surrounding me.
By having you close to my soul,
To my dark heart.

Though i have become less,
Though i have become less,
I have you.

Having you around me
Completes me.
Knowing I'm the only one
Whose heart has the key to yours
Heals me.

You are the light.
That light I've been lusting.

Sunday, January 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Learning for express my feelings through neutral yet sweet simple words.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 19 January 2015

Very haunting....very well done!

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Francie Lynch 18 January 2015

Very fine write....i have become less, / i have become less... And it doesn't get more.

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