Thursday, February 16, 2006

Dark Lover (Adult Content) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Slender, willowy, her gown billowing
around her, she waited, trembling.
White flowers spilled over her like
a wedding veil. The clouds were huge
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Mary Naylor
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James B. Earley 15 May 2008

That my friend was one passionate breeze! Excellent.

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Esther Leclerc 26 March 2006

'Her slender trunk yearned toward him. Her leafy arms trailed after him.' Such a beautiful poem! ... You are gifted. Thank you for sharing. Love to you, Esther

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Chuck Audette 26 March 2006

I picture a cherry tree in full flower in the warm caresssing breeze of a Spring night. Beautiful poem. -chuck

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Charles M Moore 03 March 2006

Very observant and composing poem holds you wishing like the tree right to the end.

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Mary Naylor

Mary Naylor

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