Saturday, July 21, 2012

Dark Times Comments

Rating: 3.5

The roses are black, my mind is blank,
The half light half dark girl in the corner is lonely,
So I wonder towards her and she turns black like coal,
I step away, Far away, The light returns,
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Michael Budwah
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Captain Cur 27 July 2012

From the dark ages, through the years of enlightenment, to dark times. Good poem, expressive and mysterious.

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Young Church Poetry 21 July 2012

A great poem with deep thoughts, I like. We are in dark times where everything seems okay even when its not okay.

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Michael Budwah

Michael Budwah

Miami, Florida
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