Sunday, October 16, 2011

Darkness Comments

Rating: 2.7

Deeper than the ocean
Alive as the sea
Rainbows of colors do not show
Knowing where they are
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Brooke Audino
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 16 October 2011

i like the interpretation you did for darkness i like the last line when you said it calls out to you you give it a persona and it is symbolic i will vote ten for it,

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Dave Walker 16 October 2011

Great poem. Short and sweet, like it. May i invite you to read my poem called, Shadows of the past.

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Brooke Audino

Brooke Audino

Butler PA
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