Darkness Breeds Poem by DM W

Darkness Breeds

Rating: 5.0


Wise voices of the old choir are being drowned out
By modern cacophonies. Spiritual drought
Is rife. We pretend that there is no fear and pain,
Yet we're desperately in need of healing rain.
It's bone dry in the deserts of our hearts and souls.
Decades of avoidance are now taking their toll.
All the great craftsmen with aged, wrinkled hands have gone.
Love's music has been replaced by discordant songs.
The time honoured seasons are now mere merchandise.
Artificial designs abound. This world's cut price.
Some may suggest that life seems so easy and smooth
These days, but where is communion? Where is Truth?
Now quick fix gadgets are our companions, we
Dream of the 'perfect' future, meanwhile darkness breeds.

Monday, September 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,modern
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 12 September 2020

Thanks Shaun. I'm very happy with this one. I think it sums up my precise feelings about this current age...which always manages to completely baffle me! I shall attempt to surf over all the chaos and concentrate on the finer things in life.

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Shaun Cronick 10 September 2020

Yes, darkness breeds as we delude ourselves as our dwindling spiritual values have set us on the road to perdition. Great poem pulling no punches Dominic, like a true warts and all revelation mantra. A dark full score and deserved too. Thanks for sharing and telling how it is for now until we see sense, then choose to change.

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