Daughter.

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Daughter I am missing you
I know where you are, but still missing you
You hugged me recently
You said to me, 'goodbye'
That goodbye is not that good, anyway
Now you are at the edge of another, others' end
And I am still here, missing you..admiring things that you gave
The reason you gave was 'for a widening..'
Thanks, thanks for being my daughter
'Love you' is from me to you and you to me.

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spreading wings
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When wings are spread we say au revoir. ++10

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Sy Wong. 20 May 2018

Robert, thanks..praise God she is spreading her wings.

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Rajnish Manga 20 May 2018

Very fatherly feeling when the daughter is not around-Daughter I am missing you. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 20 May 2018

Keep patience. Let her come to terms with the world that is going to unfold before her as an individual.

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Sy Wong. 20 May 2018

Yeah Rajnish, when will i see her again..

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