SY Wong ...

God Says Love.

My neighbour's big tree is just beside my fences
And has a lot of leaves
During, ah..when the wind blows
I love to keep my yard clear of leaves
I am done with all the trees I planted
Because they produce so much leaves, I cut them one by one
Away with all the trees I love
God says love your neighbour as thyself
Also love your enemies
Love the unlovables
Like God, love is good
God I pray teach me how to handle love..

Topic(s) of this poem: god, love

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 9, 2017

Form: Free Verse


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Leaves.

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Comments about God Says Love. by SY Wong ...

  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (5/20/2018 4:53:00 AM)

    Fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful rendition on love nicely crafted with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Sy.

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    Sy Wong.(6/15/2018 9:51:00 PM)

    Thanks, Chinedu.

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  • Diane MontemayorDiane Montemayor (9/12/2017 4:07:00 AM)

    Dear Madam,

    Love is the greatest gift from above. Love without boundary and limitation. Love the unlovable beyond your eyes..
    SIncerely,
    diane

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    Sy WongSy Wong(9/12/2017 8:11:00 AM)

    Diane, I wil try.

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (9/9/2017 9:05:00 AM)

    Love your nieghbour and his tree :)

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    Sy WongSy Wong(9/9/2017 9:20:00 AM)

    You've got it!

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