Dawn Has Come Comments

A really beautiful poem. i like it. Anjana

Beautiful. The whole is greater than the sum of the parts. It made my Monday morning. Esra Sloblock.

Dawn has come, O’er the fields of hay. As heady as golden rum, Is the clear light of day. It sings of the breeze And sweet meadow flowers Of the cold briny sea And all of Nature’s power Ah the sunlight Seeping o’er the grass You speak of untold might Of times to come and those long past My dearest Poet Sarah, The lines of lovely spiraling made us to shimmeing peaks of beauty.Really the pen you use is talented to more to write