DAWN WILL COME
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I’m swimming in darkness
Skyfull of darkness,
Roomful of darkness
Eyeful of darkness.
Visibility is possible
Through lights of hope
of heart.
To reach destination
How far knows who?
I’m tired,
By futile o’er use
Battery of hope exhausted.
Surrendering relentlessly
To darkness.
In warm wedging
I’ll park hope:
With singing bulbul
Flying;
Aqua blues
Reflecting o’er
Dancing billowed algae
On vast serene ocean
Dawn will come.
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surely a new dawn will come! a good write! This life is like a Black Box but full of Sparks Each Spark is a hope which lights the dark read mine BLACK BOX.
The words of this poem function symbolically.The elements that are used are day and night and the ocean.The ignorance is the night and the day is the consciousness.The human being is waiting the dawn, that is the awakening of the conscience.The ocean means all people.The symbols here are chosen to be straightforward and the poem is wonderful...10++++
Theres always a light at the end of dark tunnels you just have to keep moving :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem of hope Dr Sakti. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
during reading this poem i can see picture of a man who struggle but never lose hope, one proverb said ' no matter how long the night, the day is sure to come ' in the black time just remember this, be patience and dont lose hope