Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty


‘live Together Wtth Ache’ - Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

‘LIVE TOGETHER WTTH ACHE’
esspeecee // 18.03.05.

O,
Hey ache
You’re:
Colorful,
Vibrant,
Friendly
Very much indeed! [1]

Like virus
Non-living.
Enliven in
Living milieu
Of pulsating life. [2]

In various
Modalities,
Configurations,
Textures,
Tastes
You reveal. [3]

Your love,
Lingering-ness’
For livings are
Unfathomable, unstoppable. [4]

In me
You enjoy:
Your stay
Temporary
Or, permanent.
With –
Embodiment of
Ego-less- ness.
Reach us
Uncalled-for,
Unforced-for. [5]

You
Filter out
Futile, temporal
Joys and delights
Of life
And living. [6]

Blunt we’re
To understand
The very
Gamut of
The orchestration
Of your
Cosmetically colored
Pluri-potency. [7]

You enjoy
To lull
Every brighter
Merrier mementoes of
‘Goes’,
‘Goals’ of
Meaningful living. [8]

To be one
With thy
Ecstatic dance
Brew in me
Your
The unique
One and alone
Secondlessness. [9]

To me
Delight is
Dull and docile
But you’re
Hostile, crispy
Make me tipsy. [10]

Leave me not
O Dear,
Stay in my bosom
As adored
Sparkling memories of
My unblemished love
To my fiancé’s
Jilted love! [11]

I emulate, en-garland
You, with
Flowers of
Boundless patience,
Color you with
Tinseled tolerance,
Elate you with
Euphony
And sodden you with
Mellowed, somber
Savoir of
Sultry tears. [12]

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Comments about ‘live Together Wtth Ache’ by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

  • (11/8/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    very interesting poem.
    i liked you way of writing. thanks for sharing.
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  • (11/5/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    Humourous, sarcastic.... Poetic touch given to attitude towards the unwanted, unwelcome guest called pain.... Interesting thoughts - not so light as they appear, as they belong to the deeper dimension of humour, which remains unnoticed and / or silent.
    Vanita.
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (11/3/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    Even the pain has been given its due honor in this poem. This shows the kind heart of the poet who does not hesitate to receive the most unwelcome guest, the ache. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/2/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    u have a very unique style of writing and they have deep meaning. (Report)Reply

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  • Marilyn Lott (10/26/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    Very thought provoking in your unique style
    of writing. '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn
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  • (10/14/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    Agree with Poet Almedia Knight, ’… fresh definition of 'Ache'…’
    Give ten++ with melancholic euphony.
    WR
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  • (10/12/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    An intriguing and well expressed piece. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    Fantastic presentation of Ache.
    Full of grit.
    What I understand to Live with Ache not in Ache.

    With Acheful joy Ten+++ to your toiling talent
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  • Adeline Foster (10/6/2009 12:06:00 PM)

    I agree, this poem sure does present a fresh definition of 'Ache'. One that at least two of my sons would agree with whole-hearted. Job well done.
    Adeline
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  • (9/23/2009 6:02:00 PM)

    Your poem presents a fresh definition of 'Ache' and living together with it. You're colorful and vibrant-a vivid description of Ache. I rate this poem a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/15/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    beautiful and meaningful poem in short lines.
    voted10
    surya
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  • (9/6/2009 3:34:00 PM)

    ache described so wonderfully 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (9/6/2009 3:30:00 PM)

    an original poem!
    really, it's a kind of Love Story!

    10 for the faithfulness of ache!
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  • (9/6/2009 2:43:00 PM)

    Amazing poem, good idea, deep thoughts and insight...only truths about the nature of ache(s) . (Report)Reply

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  • (9/3/2009 4:39:00 AM)

    unique form! ...a spirtual catharsis happening through these profound lines. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/2/2009 1:03:00 PM)

    pains and difficulties, are part of our life, cause lies mostly within us, or it may somewhere else, but we know to live with pains, and our life remains moving on, ....well written (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    In me
    You enjoy:
    Your stay
    Temporary
    Or, permanent.
    With –
    Embodiment of
    Ego-less- ness.
    Reach us
    Uncalled-for,
    Unforced-for. [5]...with ache it takes us very close to HIM.it compels us to rememeber him when it becomes unbearable and here that is more important that they stay and be the part of misery... i like great write...10

    read mine u do any thing u like...what do i seek
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  • (8/3/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    I emulate, en-garland
    You, with
    Flowers of
    Boundless patience,
    Color you with
    Tinseled tolerance,
    Elate you with
    Euphony
    And sodden you with
    Mellowed, somber
    Savoir of
    Sultry tears. [12]

    wow what a fantastic poetic structure and unique form...fabulous diction ever written...great flow and such an ease to read...Thumbs up...Bravo! ! !
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  • premji premji (7/3/2009 12:36:00 AM)

    cross section of life doc.......... (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (6/24/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    ammmmmmazing flow! .........sinificant.
    10+
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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2009


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