Monday, September 7, 2020
Day After Day Comments
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When I see the important flower,
I become sad and pensive,
When I don't see it,
I become gloomy and dreary too,
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Deluke Muwanigwa
07 September 2020
Good one. I reckon if you placed the title phrase...day after day on top of every 3 lines your poem will rock more. I think.
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12/23/2025 5:27:11 PM # 1.0.0
Is this because you don't interact with it? Give the flower water, talk to it, pull the weeds and watch it grow and the happiness will show. Awesome poem, thanks for sharing.