Day Breaker Poem by Little Red Apple

Day Breaker

Rating: 5.0


In that day,
An unknown man walked slowly but surely to my place
With an intention in his mind to broke my day
Making warmth of that day be the freezing ice
A beautiful day become one bad day

I've been too tired with this
I don't even have a single tear
To moisten my face by this
To be burst into my tears
Or just to verge me of tears

Wanted to give a shot to shout
'Hey, main your own! '
But my heart was falling down
And my eyes only could glare at
His face that's like a clown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 April 2009

Don't know why you let your day open to him break...intriguing write, Little...half open half veiled...and hence nice...10

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Blue Eyes 08 March 2009

i like the suspense in it, its brilliant.

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