Little Red Apple

Rookie (02/05/1989 / Tulungagung)

Sunset From The Moving Train - Poem by Little Red Apple

When I see the sunset from this moving train
Which decorated by the pretty fine rain
I remember you as my sun brighten my day
With your shiny smile shining my way

When you have to set at your ease
I'll accept it with a will
Though I may see you just a lil'
Tomorrow, the day after, and the following you will be the same

You will give me that smile
Your unpretentious smile
Needn't to be asked
No need to begged

Seeing that sunset from this moving train
Makes me to forget the suffer of the pain
Even though you will replaced by the moon
I'll see you again enough soon

Comments about Sunset From The Moving Train by Little Red Apple

  • (4/14/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    a dawn dear to heart is always there after every sunset...bright words filled with hopes expectations and love...good write, Little...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Allen Steble (2/6/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    very sweet, the imagery was very good you can just picture the scenario of the train moving away from the sun, to remind of the bright essence of a friendship and the memories shared, very nice (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/2/2009 1:00:00 AM)

    This is love that ends with a big bang! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (1/31/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    these lines are painfully dear to me......... (Report) Reply

  • (1/31/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    lovely visualisations...a painting wit words (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    Something about trains, stations and romance? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    Beautiful images you have here...thank you.. (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2009 9:33:00 PM)

    wow this is a wonderful poem, probably one of my favorites, great write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009

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