Sheldon Allen Saluta

Rookie (December 26,1991 / Davao City)

Days And Minutes - Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Counting the days to past
Until I forgotten, at last
The pain which is still fresh
Hurting me ravagely, flesh to flesh

It’s 19th of August
To overcome, it’s all I cost
Living behind my lost
Truth of third party kills me almost

I do visitation
And your lovely recitation
That you’d love me wholly
But you left me in the streets lonely

I still keep the letters
And your promises, it matters
Still, I read it, madly
Coz it reminds me of you sadly

Counting the minutes to pass
Coz I wanted to sleep, to last
And to dream, you and me
In our sweet and bliss moment, we’ll be

Comments about Days And Minutes by Sheldon Allen Saluta

  • (2/15/2010 11:50:00 AM)

    this is intriguing. I don't know the exact meaning of the poem, but I can definitely sense the emotions in it. well written, if you write with the same goals I do.8/10 (Report) Reply

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  • (2/11/2010 2:09:00 PM)

    what is a promise...but a misconception of the one at the other end...reminders are sometimes painful...but be glad...not sad...understanding is a wise tool... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

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