Sheldon Allen Saluta

Rookie (December 26,1991 / Davao City)

Blearing Love - Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Am I right to end our nexus?
Just for a simple jealous?
But I need a protection
For my heart, not ventilation

Why my tears suddenly fallin’?
I heard voice, I felt something’s calling’
I followed, I saw something
It was my life book of living

I was reading it, with pleasure
But there’s nothing to measure
And staring at a blank page
There is something wrong, not usage

I, do, about to realize
Tears and page are traumatize
Now I know, the cause of tears
And a blank page is “You to Blear”

Comments about Blearing Love by Sheldon Allen Saluta

  • (4/23/2010 11:28:00 PM)

    'I was reading it with pleasure' gee son you are getting wiser with each write...keep on inking 'em out...yo are getting better and better... (Report) Reply

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  • (4/21/2010 1:32:00 AM)

    Once I read “I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love...this write captures the pain painfully. (Report) Reply

  • May Witwit (4/20/2010 9:33:00 AM)

    How we evaluate things changes as we grow, but how we feel remains pretty much the same. Nice (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2010 9:20:00 AM)

    Life and love is the matter of cloud and earth
    And Love don't always win.

    I hope you don't fell like in this poem.
    IF, it is so pain full
    I know the felling.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/18/2010 2:50:00 PM)

    Nothing on this earth last my friends
    That's why love is pain
    (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (4/18/2010 1:35:00 AM)

    awww.... words depicted nicely in this virtual paper! .... nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2010 2:05:00 PM)

    near blindness is not a funny thing nor is it a feeling wanted...please...note... love is a situation as is all of brave young shall has much power...good or bad... (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 3:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem dear friend true emotions nice comment on love situation go ahead write more (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

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