I woke up to the noise of unbearable silence
And realized that my baby was gone from hence.
Rain thrashed the relentless window panes
Announcing the killer winding up in the lanes
Waiting for the rain to wash out his sin.
His guy fawkes slipped, revealing a flicker of a grin.
When I got up to see through the eerie air,
I slipped and fell in a pool of crimson slime.
Following the trails of the blood swept liar,
I crawled through the mindless rooms of my head
Inside a particularly morbid one, I saw my lover laid down dead.
A knife twisted in her gut; a grisly sight of snuffed life.
I sat there for a long time, covered in gushing obscurity
Hearing flashes of sights, seeing patterns and echoes
Completely dazed and confused.
I crawled through the mindless rooms of my head Inside a particularly morbid one, I saw my lover laid down dead. expressing the void and struggle and inner turmoil.........very nice poem..very expressive, full of emotion and mystery.. thank u dear poetess. tony
I wonder if you plugged your fountain pen into an electrical outlet before writing this energized vision.
A good start with a nice poem, Rohitha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
eerie and frightening piece telling a horrifying tale... shiver... compelling very compelling writing