Deadly Tongues, Ended Love Poem by Reecy M

Deadly Tongues, Ended Love

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I want to say 'I love you'
But I know that I can't
When I tell you I love you
Does it come from my heart?

At first I thought I loved you
But I never knew you then
I quickly rushed into something
I really don't know how or when

As I learned more about you
I loved you more and more
Each time I saw your face
I knew I wanted you for sure

But others didn't like you
They never did approve
And I sat there and listened
I thought what they said was true

Now we are apart
And it's all because of me
I refused to stand up
For what I truly believed

When I am with you
I am so happy
However when they start talking
I want to leave

We are not ordinary
We are very unique
We are not a normal pair
But you DON'T have to speak

Now we aren't together
There's nothing I can do
Don't worry I'll move on
But I hate ALL OF YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koti Tatum 12 January 2009

wow, very strong words. Could you comment on my poems as well, please and thank you(:

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