Dear God Poem by Keerthi Poluru

Dear God

Rating: 4.6


When you walk with me oh god,
everything seems so beautiful,
the blazing sun in shadowless sky,
the thundering storm and deafening wind
I see the savage beauty through you
and I reckon wandering wilderness in me.

Monday, July 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhaaswanth Yerramsetti 01 July 2019

Lovely. The way you described in just a few words is commendable.

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Yatheendra 01 July 2019

Nice, keep writing....

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Lee Boueri 16 November 2019

nice write,6 lines well connected.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 July 2019

I see the savage beauty through you and I reckon wandering wilderness in me. very good poem. relate ourselves with God through prayer and see God through nature. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Keerthi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sahithya 02 July 2019

Nice one Keerthi...

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2019

A poignant rendition nicely brought forth with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing, Keerthi.

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