Death Poem by jess achilles

Death

Rating: 3.0


Not only fear is deth
an awkward scary dream.
understanding emotions would make you wanna scream.
Some teens bleed the blood they cut with a razor blade on the wrist.
Some teens try to hang themselvs its all just a bliss.
suicide is very popular today and some just want to die.
So people should care for there kids because it could be yours that wants to die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr John Celes 15 April 2007

Good telling Jess! The modern world is over-stressed; Values in life are changing fast; Adolescence is a dangerous stage; Many battles you must wage, Until you reach a mature age! Life has both joys and sadnesses. Learn to think positively, child. Dr John Celes

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Stug Jordan 13 April 2007

Pretty bleak stuff, Jess. You have a scruffy style which I love. This poem sounds good but looks uncomfortable, which I like too. S x

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