Saturday, April 7, 2007

Death Comments

Rating: 3.0

Not only fear is deth
an awkward scary dream.
understanding emotions would make you wanna scream.
Some teens bleed the blood they cut with a razor blade on the wrist.
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Dr John Celes 15 April 2007

Good telling Jess! The modern world is over-stressed; Values in life are changing fast; Adolescence is a dangerous stage; Many battles you must wage, Until you reach a mature age! Life has both joys and sadnesses. Learn to think positively, child. Dr John Celes

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Stug Jordan 13 April 2007

Pretty bleak stuff, Jess. You have a scruffy style which I love. This poem sounds good but looks uncomfortable, which I like too. S x

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