Death Poem by Death Walking

Death

Rating: 4.5


People try to push me
To a future that I dont want
They tell me drugs are good
Pain is pretty Death is normal

I tell them that they must
Stop speaking lies to me
Becuase if they don't I will be forced
To give them that which they so long for

That which they long for
Is just a way out
A way out of this hell called life
And the only way out is Death

Many say Death is fun
The best roller coaster at the fair
I say Death is not the best ride at the fair
Death is the boring and terrible ride back home

So i will give them that ride
And they won't like it at all
Because i will drag them out
As they kick and they scream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yr ~Rune for Death~ 19 April 2011

very nice. this is well written and well expressed. though there is more to this death that should be expressed you did a good job from what i got from it. keep writting

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this is a strong agressive poem that seems to only want the negative ppl out of this place. those who dont want to be here..this is a great peom. it has words with meaning but i love the meaning i found behind it...

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Chidori Storm 31 March 2010

I commend you, oh great and powerful Death! ☺

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