I lookedI saw I wishI missedI beggedI prayedI believedI failedI looked I sawA wish A starI wish Upon itI missedIts gone
i really love this poem. Funny though just a few nights ago i saw a shooting star and i was so shocked that i blinked and it was gone and with it the chance to make a wish.
Powerful and thought provoking with a unique style! Keep it up! You got what it takes to make in the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
I enjoyed this poem, it makes me think about the stars I failed to wish upon.
interesting style of writing I liked it there was room for imagination and I like that when it comes to poetry well done again
sometimes the words unspoken are the meaning a writer wants the reader to find... i love this poem...
short and sweet... I love it! !
short but meaningful....loved it i did^-^
KEEP WRITING DUDE :)
nice and very good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem »