Death Poem by Jessica LaDuron

Death

Rating: 5.0


death comes so easy,
i just want him to take e away
away from a world of suffering
into a world just like heaven,
and if death can't come and take me,
then i will simply meet him there
i will wait by the gates of death,
and knife in my hand,
and when i see him coming to me from the otehr side,
that knife will be my best friend
he will crush my heart,
jsut like the many lovers that i've had
and i will finally be with my one true love,
and death will not hurt me,
for he sees the pain in my eyes,
and he can read the thoughts in my head,
he sees the lies, and the trouble that i've caused,
he not only sees the pain i have endured,
but also the pain i have caused,
and death walks away,
unhappy with me,
and i call to him,
longing to be loved,
yet he does not come back,
he just walks into the sunset,
that was never there when i needed it to be


tell me what you think, i know im a little creepy, but i can't help it, sry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 24 March 2008

Yes it is creepy, and yes you can help it. Death is not your friend, certainly not the way you seem to seek it. Life, however, pulsates through everything and is certainly stronger than death if you allow it to be. Life is infinite in its expression. Death is always the same in its expression and is many times associated with a total waste, a squandering of opportunity, suicide, murder, senseless, violence, avoidable accident, hatred, apathy, bitterness, lack of appreciation, ungratefulness, lonliness, foolishness, stupidity, the absence of goodness, sterility, or being pathetic. Life, when lived to the fullest ends in joy and is not really the end but merely a shifting of one type of energy into another at the proper time. Death is not something to fear for those who love life, but it is not something to embrace either. Embrace Life and be glad. Live life to the fullest! Seek out the one Life, the source and origin of all life, and be greatful that you have breath.

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