Death Comments

Thus Spake funereal procedures…in poetic canvas… ‘My memory will disappear’…but astral body will carry every necessary thing [samaskara] to me a break journey have to wait for next poetry to reach the destination…. thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS I second comments of Poet Deepti n

Death is the Truth..but surprisingly it is not The End... life still persist even when death approches or overpowers.. even then life reappears...

i used to think like this, now it is the other way around. john

Very well-written verses Sir.10/10

very nice. last stanza summerizes it all. well done.

Superb.........Death in superlative form! The last four lines tell the truth, yes birth & death they are twin brothers.(You too respect the Buddhist philosophy it seems)