Saturday, June 2, 2012

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moment of truth has arrived
Everywhere there is calm
The air is counting its steps
In a hurry to fly over the palm
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 July 2015

There is no tomorrow. The poem inspires us to value the present and do all good that you can do in present.Loved reading the poem

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Naima Boughezal 08 May 2013

very touching, thank you for describing this moment of truth in such a sad expression.the present is gone, there is no tomorrow.

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Naima Boughezal 08 May 2013

very touching, . thank you for describing this moment of truth in such a sad expression.the pesent is gone, there is no tomorrow.

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Ruby Mostazir 21 April 2013

The present is gone, there is no tomorrow... heart touching!

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Sun Shine 26 November 2012

(Love would no more torment the heart) ... way of perception is different! ! (The present is gone, there is no tomorrow) ...it depicts pessimistic approach towards life.. Beautifully composed! ! Enriched with bitter reality! ! ! !

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Anita Sehgal 20 November 2012

great write.. poignant.. also read mine quietus

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for every human out there, will be a moment of death, and when time comes, it would be sadness all over great reflective poem The_African_Son

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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2012

A picture of total negation.The air of pensiveness is blowing around.Glum mood is penned successfully.10+++

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